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FDR, the editor

“Yesterday, comma, December 7th, comma, 1941 dash . . . .”

On the day that Pearl Harbor was attacked, President Franklin Roosevelt dictated a speech that would become one of the most famous in American history. Unlike more modern presidents, who employ an army of speechwriters, Roosevelt wrote much of his own speeches.

He began this one by dictating the words in the headline above to Grace Tully, his secretary. The first draft of his first sentence was, “Yesterday, December 7th, 1941 -- a day which will live in world history . . . .”

Roosevelt was a notorious and perfecting editor, particularly of his own copy. No one knows what went through his mind when he was writing and editing this speech, but the evidence that he was giving each word much thought can be found in the image above. He made many changes to that draft. To Roosevelt, those first words were important, and they had to be right. They must have sound flat, like the beginning of a dull history lesson.

Somewhere in the process, “day” became “date,” signifying a larger and more memorable moment in history than just a day. And “world history” became “infamy.” Roosevelt needed a word that would express the outrage that Americans felt about being “suddenly and deliberately attacked.”

Infamy was the word he chose. It hadn’t come to him at first. It came only in the editing process.

And it has become an indelible part of American history.

Jim Stovall (April 17, 2005)


The speech that Roosevelt delivered last slightly more than seven minutes. If you want to hear this speech, you can see it at the web site of the History Channel.



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